आभार

जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

जीवन अस्थिर अनजाने ही, हो जाता पथ पर मेल कहीं,
सीमित पग डग, लम्बी मंज़िल, तय कर लेना कुछ खेल नहीं।
दाएँ-बाएँ सुख-दुख चलते, सम्मुख चलता पथ का प्रसाद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

साँसों पर अवलम्बित काया, जब चलते-चलते चूर हुई,
दो स्नेह-शब्द मिल गये, मिली नव स्फूर्ति, थकावट दूर हुई।
पथ के पहचाने छूट गये, पर साथ-साथ चल रही याद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

जो साथ न मेरा दे पाये, उनसे कब सूनी हुई डगर?
मैं भी न चलूँ यदि तो क्या, राही मर लेकिन राह अमर।
इस पथ पर वे ही चलते हैं, जो चलने का पा गये स्वाद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

कैसे चल पाता यदि न मिला होता मुझको आकुल अंतर?
कैसे चल पाता यदि मिलते, चिर-तृप्ति अमरता-पूर्ण प्रहर!
आभारी हूँ मैं उन सबका, दे गये व्यथा का जो प्रसाद –
जिस-जिस से पथ पर स्नेह मिला, उस-उस राही को धन्यवाद।

54 Replies to “आभार”

  1. I am highly toughed with the poem and believe this is one of the rearest poem which should be spoken to everyone to make the life more beautiful.
    Thanks to the writer.
    Best compliments,
    Prashant London.

    1. Dear Mr. Prashant
      My son is on the verge of completing his M.Sc(infomation Technology Management & Organizational Change) from Lancaster university,UK.He passed his B.E(Computer Science) in first class from Mumbai university.He is 24 years of age & posseses good personality.He is active,hard working & sincere but we have no one in UK to guide & support him.I request you to guide & support him for getting a job in UK.Regards

  2. Yes, this is the poem that I have gifted to two persons in my life till now who has helped me to make my life more comfortable. Just a way of expressing my thanks to them. I really love this poem.

  3. If there’s any work in the history of Hindi literature that brings out the most sincere feelings of the author during the last few days of his life and which clearly indicate that the poet had intuited his death, it is ” ABHAAR” only.

  4. Thanks for remainding me of my schooldays.I got very nostalgic.All of these poems were in CBSE course content.Thanks again.

  5. Simple words have the deepest impact. Is what I believe. This poem does just that. Touches you to the core with visuals of your very own life.. The poem belongs not just to the writer but to all of us who read it … thanks …

  6. I am completley satisfied when I have read this poem realy I am very thankful of writer thanks lot

    this realy true without friends we are alone in this world and everthing is worthless and enoyless

  7. W0W…it’s relly great poetry.i like “SUMAN JI’S POEM” some poem has been read in my school life.**हरि ओम…ओम हरि ओम…**

  8. Shivmangal Singh Suman Ji ki Kavita Aabhaar Mujhe Bahut Pasand Hai.
    Kafi dinon k baad net pe kavita ko padhne ka awsar mila to usko maine gawana uchit nahin samjha!
    Shivmagal ji ke ek ek shabdon ko koto koti dhanyavaad!

  9. क्या पाया, क्या पाकर खोया
    क्या काटा और क्या क्या बोया

    किस्मत के धोबी ने हमको
    हर पत्थर पर जमकर धोया

    गर्दन करके कलम मेरी
    वो बोले ये क्यों कम है रोया

    मेरा सपना डर के मारे
    रातों को भी रहता सोया

    हमने बड़ी ख़ुशी से
    हर एक बोझ जिंदगी का है ढोया

    ग़ालिब होते तो कहते
    मेरा गम भी कोई गम था मोया

    ye poetry maine ek blog par padhi “ranjanathepoet.blogspot.com” i liked it very much. to socha aaplogo ke saath bhi share karu…:)

  10. “Jis Jis path par sneh mila us us rahi ko dhanyavad”–
    Really,very nice poem thanking all those who gave us their love in our journey through life.

  11. US PATH KO HAE SHAT SHAT NAMAN MERA , JIS PATH PE MILA THA MUJHE SAVERA
    RAHI HAIN US PATH KE HUM SAB , PHIR KYUN KISI KO TAAP , KISI KO HAE CHANV KI MADHUR BELA
    HAR RAHGEER AYA THA AKELA , NAMAN KAR IS PATH KO VIMUKT HOGA BHI AKELA….
    JAHAN DUKHOON KI LAHROON KE VO THAPEDE HAIN…
    VAHIN SUKH SE PRAJVALIT ANEKOON DIYE HAIN….
    YAHAN KOI SWARTH KI MAYA ME HAE KHOYA ,
    KOI NISVARTH BHAV SE MOKSH HAE PAYA….
    SAMKAKSH JISKE HAIN VIRANE , JAJVALYAMAN HAIN KAHIN USKE LIYE MAIKHANE….
    PHIR BHI JIS KO YAHAN ANDHER HUA , USKO SURYA NE PRAJVALIT KIYA….
    USHNA NE JAB DEH KO NAM KIYA , IS PATH KE TARU NE , KIS KO NAHIN YAHAN , VISHRAM DIYA….
    US PATH KO HAE SHAT SHAT NAMAN MERA , JIS PATH PE MILA THA MUJHE SAVERA….

    IS PATH PAR , RAEN NE KIYA JO TAM KA UDGHOSH , KYA NAHI VYAPIT KIYA VO MADHOSH SAVERA….
    ANDHIYOON NE JAB PATHIKOON KO KIYA ATANKIT , VARSHA NE KIYA US GUBAR SE SWATANTRIT…..
    JIS PATH PE HAR RAHI AGRASAR HUA , KYUN USKI MAHATVATA KO HAE HAE BHUL CHALA….
    HAR RAHI KO HAE ISNE JEEVANDAN DIYA , ANGINAT PATHIKOON KO VISHRAM DIYA….
    SPARSH SE JISKE CHALNA SEEKHA , KYUN USKO HAE YUN BHULA DIYA…..
    JIS PATH NE ASHAOON KO NAAM DIYA , KYUN USKA HAE YUN APMAAN KIYA….
    JIS PATH NE , PATHIKOON KO APNO KA SATH DIYA , USKO KYUN NAHIN UCHIT SAMMAN DIYA…
    HAE MERA SHAT SHAT NAMAN US PATH KO…JISNE MUHE YE SANSAR DIYA….
    JISNE MUJHE YE SANSAR DIYA….

    DIS POEM IS WRITTEN BY ME…..MYSLF IS MANAS SAXENA…
    WITH D INSPIRATION OF KAVIVAR SHIV MANGAL SINGH ‘ SUMAN ‘.
    CUDNT MATCH WITH D MESMERIZING POEM OF SUMANJI…
    BT I WROTE DIS AFTER READING HIS POEM.
    HOPE U ALL VIL LIKE AND APPRECIATE IT….THNX…DHANYAVAD.

    1. HAREES RANA
      such a wonderfull poem………….I HAVE NO WORDS TO SAY ABOUT IN PRAISE OF POETRY………….I AM SPEECHLESS.

    1. THNX DEAR…IT SEEMS DAT U R ALSO INTERESTED IN POEM WRITING…
      IF U HV ANY CREATION OF URS PLZ LT ALL OF US KNO…

      NW A DAYS PEOPLE R NT INTERESTED IN ALL DESE STUFF…
      VRY FEW PEOPLE R INTO DIS…

  12. aise diggaz ko dekh ke hi ham nat mastak aur naman kiya
    koshish jaari hai barso se wo ham bhi kare jo “Suman” kiye

    amazing inspirational poem. I also write poetry not to the standards of Suman sir but do attempt to write good in both Hindi and English at saurabhahuja.com. appreciate if you suggest a platform to make them better and post thereafter.

    1. THNX A LOT DEAR…I WAN 2 TELL U 1 THING ABOUT POETS…ND THR CREATIONS..
      DNT COMPARE ANY POET ND THR POEMS BCOZ SABKA MINDSET DIFFERENT HOTA HAE…
      V CNT MATCH SUMAN JI…
      BT V CN GT D INSPIRATION FRM HIS CREATION 2 WRITE BETTER…LTS DO IT…TC. ALL D VRY BEST.

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